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01 Jun 2010 19:53 / last edited 18 Feb 2011 17:40
Ik ben begonnen met een digitaal schilderij (alsof ik nog niet genoeg stijlen heb uitgeprobeerd ). Ik zal proberen om hier regelmatig een update te laten zien. Dit is wat ik al heb;

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Dit is dus op een hemels plekje/paleis. Op de achtergrond zie je de wolken, en op de ondergrond liggen tegels die naar rechts de diepte in lopen. De pilaren worden in ionische stijl, en er komen nog klimop bladeren op.
Tot zover ging het allemaal wel goed, maar ik heb ongelofelijke moeite met de handen en de vouwen en plooien in de jurk. Haar linkerhand heb ik nu gelukkig kunnen verbeteren, maar de andere ziet er nog steeds niet uit. Adviezen en kritiek zijn daarom zeer welkom. Het moet er namelijk perfect uit zien, om het echt hemels te laten zijn.


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01 Jun 2010 20:24
Ziet er goed uit Ik geloof dat de handen van grootte verschillen. In zo'n mate dat het niet door perspecief komt.

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01 Jun 2010 20:25
dat is waar ja
de rechterhand is naar mijn idee te groot

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01 Jun 2010 21:24
Ziet er goed uit ja Maar inderdaad kloppen de verhoudingen niet helemaal geloof ik; de armen zijn bijvoorbeeld erg kort in vergelijking met haar hoofd en handen, en sowieso lijkt haar hoofd nogal groot uitgevallen. Tip; teken eerst het lichaam zonder kleren en drapeer dan pas een jurk erover, dan is het makkelijker eventuele foutjes te zien voordat je je veel details toevoegt en zie je beter hoe de stof moet vallen

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01 Jun 2010 21:27
Wat voor idee heb je eigenlijk precies van "hemels"? Je zegt dat het perfect moet zijn, maar dat is in ieders ogen anders.

Persoonlijk lijkt het me mooi als je op de grond en tussen de pilaren door ook wat wolkjes ziet (niet te veel), om het hemelser over te laten komen. Misschien ook een soort lichte waas erbij om het dromeriger over te laten komen, maar ik weet niet precies hoe ik dat moet beschrijven.

Maarja, dat is gewoon mijn idee ervan, kan bij jou heel anders zijn natuurlijk.

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01 Jun 2010 21:56
Ik wil wel een uitgebreider antwoord schrijven, maar ik hoop dat je me wil vergeven dat ik het nu even kort hou:
- Haar armen zijn worstjes; ik zie niet of nauwelijks een elleboog o.i.d.
- Haar hoofd staat niet goed op haar nek.
- Haar nek staat niet goed op haar schouders (ze heeft een brede en een smalle schouder).
- Probeer je compositie wat verder uit te werken voordat je aan de details begint.
- Laat de kleuren van verschillende objecten op elkaar inwerken. De zanderige kleur van de grond kan je bijvoorbeeld laten terugkomen in schaduwen en reflecties op de jurk, het blauw van de lucht in haar haar, etc.

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02 Jun 2010 10:47
Bedankt voor jullie reacties. Ik ga nog even heel goed naar de anatomie en verhoudingen kijken, want daar klopt zoals jullie al zeggen nog niet veel van. Ook ga ik eerst even de achtergrond wat meer afwerken, voordat ik verder ga met alle details.

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27 Jun 2010 15:05
Kleine update:

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12 Jul 2010 17:34
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De eindversie

het had nog beter afgewerkt kunnen worden, maar daar had ik geen zin meer in.

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12 Jul 2010 17:36 / last edited 12 Jul 2010 18:47
Volgende keer beter.
Ik vind het wel interessant dat je haar hele linkerarm (voor ons) donker heb gemaakt, zelf zou ik dat niet zo snel gedaan hebben.

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18 Feb 2011 17:38
Toch maar weer een klein beetje bewerkt. Het is nu beter, maar nog steeds crap.

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18 Feb 2011 17:43
Ik moest even zoeken, maar de aanpassingen zijn inderdaad wel verbeteringen.

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18 Feb 2011 17:50
Zoek de verschillen.

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18 Feb 2011 17:54
haha, ik zal maar vast verklappen dat ik alleen haar gezicht, het haar en haar rechterarm bewerkt heb.

Even m'n brein ontstoppen
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18 Feb 2011 19:54
Ik vind het gezicht er in ieder geval een stuk beter uit zien ^^
Erg mooi

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02 Mar 2011 19:48
Die handen/jurk zijn echt heel mooi!